FINAL. TRILL

Early in this year, I learned the importance of using certain angles to help make your messege more clear.  You can see that in my first film, I didn't really follow a certain shot list because there were certain clips that didn't seem like they were supposed to be there. I realize now that if we had a certain planned shot list then it would have made it a lot better. In my second project, I learned how to overlay and insert clips so that they will be placed properly for the film. You can see this is the cyberbullying video we made. I found this quite difficult to understand because of all the complicated directions and understandings but after a while it sort of explained itself.  Another concept that was hard to get used to was over the shoulder shots. I was hard to wrap my head around filming someones questions and responses all in one clip. Filming without having the feel for the shot you're filming felt weird, but in the end it all made sense. I believe I used most of the things I've learned in this class on my final video.  So in a way the final video served it's purpose.  It made me remember and utilize everything I've learned and made me squish it all in to one film.  Thank you for making me a better film maker. I can't wait to do this in the future.

value_final, comments

The 6 best comments:

-The most important sound effect was the beep after when Dillon spat the apple out. It was very funny. John and Joselyn

- Over all we think you did a good job you made a value hilarious and random. Michaela C, Ashley T

- We especially like the extreme close-up of Dillon's eyes. Brad and Chris

- We especially like the extreme closeup shot of Dillon because it helped emphasize the idea that the apple was bad. Michaela and Cole

- the rapid zooming in and out on the chocolate milk Kelsey

- the close up on the kids knees when he came out of the bathroom Kelsey

-the rapid zooming in and out of the kids face at the end of the film Kelsey

Suggestions:

-One edit you could change wene jake is comeing out of the bathroom an he said something i could not hear him. we felt that point was right there it was good. Jake and Alex

- There wasn't any music but we suggest maybe a strolling type of music in the beginning until the guy gives the apple to Dillon. John and Joselyn

-. If you could re-film your shots some things that you could do would be to speak louder when filming and make the opening shot less shakey Kelsey

- The credits were not done. Sabrena, Ashley P, Eddie E

This post is fromKaycee and Marleen.
The positive comments that were most meaningful to us were from Kelsey, John, and Joselyn. (two different posts, not a pair saying one thing).Kelsey told us that she liked a lot of our angles and our zoomingand that was helpful becausewe weren't quite sure if anyone would like them or if it would even be effective at all. In addition, John and Joselyn told us that our beep sound effect was cool, and that helped us see that kids our age like potty mouths.
The two best suggestions we got were from Jake and alex,  and John and Joselyn.

Jake and Alex suggested that we turn up the sound because they couldn't hear the funny parts. We agree with this suggestion, and our plan to address it is to turn it up!John and Joselyn suggested that we add music to our walking part and just to add music in general. We agree with this suggestion, and our plan to address it is to possibly add some tunes that fit with our video.

values_video, reflections

The value we are trying to represent is the value of honesty.  We think our group did well because we used what would seem like a real life situation.  We still need to tweak the editing and titles a bit but other then that it is golden.  What we would like is feedback on the volume of some clips.  The voices could have been a little louder and more clear.  The only challenge we really faced was how to express honesty using a simple, down to earth, method.  Stealing a friends chocolate milk.